Template 3 - sending a revision
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Subject: Revised proof — Spring menu (v2, replaces v1)

Hi Anna,

New version attached: bloom-spring-menu-v2.pdf. Please work from this one
and ignore v1.

What changed since the last proof:
  · Honey Oat Latte price now 4.90
  · opening hours moved to the back page
  · "Sencha Green" spelling fixed

Everything else is unchanged. Same two answers as before: APPROVED, or
CHANGES with what's still wrong.

Thanks,
Sam

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